Comment on Exposition Variations by Nick Tramdack
I guess you’re not the type who likes to watch Attract Mode play on a loop? Sometimes you get unique cutscenes that way. But then, I’m also the kind who periodically closes a book and LOOKS AT THE BACK...
View ArticleComment on If Dan Brown Wrote a Sex Scene by Mark Pantoja
I actually want more Dick LongDong tales! More Dick please, sir!
View ArticleComment on Ham-Fisted Writing Techniques Ran Up Cynthia’s Spine by frederick...
Rightly or wrongly, I believe a lot of the ‘ham-fistedness’ stems from the writer’s lack of belief in his own character. If the image in the writer’s mind is two-dimensional, the first time he or she...
View ArticleComment on Ham-Fisted Writing Techniques Ran Up Cynthia’s Spine by ageiser
You have to trust the reader to look between the lines, where the best of the story is told, but you first have to put down lines to read between. It is a quandary. I wonder if the Kuleshov Effect is...
View ArticleComment on When Empty Things Aren’t Empty by Gabriel Chase (@Kodanshi)
Interestingly enough, my brother–in–law took me to McDonald’s and we both had an egg and cheese McMuffin bagel. However, they are either sausage or bacon, and he had to specify ‘no sausage’. I told him...
View ArticleComment on Action Writing Secrets of Wuxia Novels by darkneverbright
Although I just barely found this article in 2013, I still find it very appealing. You write really well, very informative. This will definitely help other Wuxia writers.
View ArticleComment on Cutting to Present in a Past Tense Story by Matt
what page was the Hounorable Schoolboy quote?
View ArticleComment on Cutting to Present in a Past Tense Story by Nick Tramdack
I’m afraid I was working off a library book and cannot confirm but my notes say it was 303-312. This would’ve been an older hardback edition. Hope it helps!
View ArticleComment on Exposition Variations by yenian
Attract Mode only really works if the story line of the game isn’t critical. There’s no garuntee a given arcade goer would even see it, either out of impatience, or because they slot their quarter...
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